What it needs:
I can't really give this a number out of 10 because I understand that it isn't done yet, and it wouldn't be fair of me. What the track could use is some more progression. It starts with a cool melody, dance line, fades out, then brings back the same melody it started with. Make it progress. Start with some more basic drums, bring in some bass, maybe pads, then a simple melody or series of notes that sounds like the main melody, but is simpler and is NOT the same. THEN fade out, and when you bring it back up, use the real melody. It will sound much better. I would also recommend bringing out the hihats a bit more and making the claps louder. You should also check out the bass, it sounds very standard, and doesn't sound original. Overall though, for what you have so far, it is good by all measures, keep working on it.